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nice drawin
and nice arrange of colours
great job

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nice drawin
and nice arrange of colours
great job

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The key to unlocking your mind lies not within others,
But lies within yourself.
Free Your Mind
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SWEEEEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTT omg this is ur best yet!!! OMGOMGOMGOMG soo cool!! im gonna like....kill u once i get to school on mon.....heh.. i havent done any portfolio work yet >.> i still have the rest of tonight and tomorrw........and tomorrow....and tomorw....wow....how long can i keep this up?

thank you meng--hey you shouldn't even be talking!<--all of my work sucks next to yours! *jealous* and you always have nice pics, where mine are good every once in a while...so...now i'm going to go cry in a corner. jk. I love ya and I hope that you're getting farther on your portfolio project than I am--damn citizen kane! anyway, I gtg and work on that now. ttyl <3 nari

Oh happy dagger :forking:

this is very well layed out, i'lll give you a real critique ok, but only cuz I care
her bodice is absolutely perfect, very nicely done. her thumb is very flat and fat, just find a model, a mom or friend or brother etc. and draw their hand.
the candle holders are very flat it only takes a second to make them look 3D.
her face and hair are beautiful, but it seems the hair is defying gravity just a little in parts, which is ok.

make the wrinkles in her dress have depth by adding shadows to the wrinkles! her sleeves could use just a couple in key spots, like above her elbow,, look at your own shirt in the mirror from the side to see what I mean ok?

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Put a little light comming in through the stained gladd windows.. or if there is no light, have her reflection in the glass. The hand holding the blade itself, her left one I beleive, is a little off... but you probably see that. ANd maybe make the wall darker, to emphasize the light of the candles and window. Is that ok?

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yep yep, it's definally the best u've ever put on this net ^^ great works, and about the criticising.......um~ lets see......well......nah....i never was good at criticising people, espicially when they have done such great work^^

nya nya!! That's really pretty!! Awsome colours!! Great job!!!

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thank you so much for the suggestions--in fact that's just what i needed to hear. I knew that the hands may be a little messed up and I attempted to shade, but I didn't pay enough attention to make the shadows really pop (or, well, you know what I mean). Thank you for the +fav. I really hope that I can add some changes and have it look 100% better, so thanks for the comment! *grateful hug*

thank you! It's not completed, but I hope to add a few changes/last touches to make it a lot better. So thank you for the encouraging comment!